Chapter 11: Marked Momentum
With a storm of thoughts in their heads and pride humming quietly in their chests, the trio parted ways that evening, each heading toward the warmth of familiar walls—and the guardians who had watched them grow.
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At the Blake household, dinner was already on the table when Max broke the news. He didn't make a speech or dramatize it—just casually dropped it between bites of roasted vegetables.
"I've been offered a spot with the investigation department," he said, glancing up. "Official work. Real cases. Skipping the academy."
His mother paused mid-chew, blinking. "Like… a job? Already?"
Jonathan set down his glass and raised an eyebrow. "That's no small offer."
Max nodded. "It's connected to the case we solved. They're recognizing what we did—and giving us the chance to keep doing it."
For a moment, there was silence. Then Evelyn broke into a teasing smile.
"So much for 'just looking into a few oddities,' huh? Nothing dangerous, you said."
Max smirked. "Still wasn't, technically."
But her gaze softened. Behind the joke, pride flickered in her eyes.
Jonathan remained calm, measured—always the professional. "It's a rare opportunity," he said thoughtfully. "But not one to rush into. Take some time to consider what it means. What it could lead to."
"I know, will do," Max said, nodding.
They moved on to lighter conversation, but the undercurrent of pride remained. Later that evening, while Max retreated to his room, his parents lingered in the kitchen, sipping after-dinner tea.
Evelyn spoke first. "You're thinking the same thing I am, aren't you?"
Jonathan nodded slowly. "That someone gave him this opportunity for a reason."
"You think it's good or bad?"
"That's what I'm trying to figure out," Jonathan said. "I'll ask around. See what my old contacts know."
Evelyn nodded, her fingers curling around the ceramic mug. "I'll do the same."
They didn't say anything more. But both understood: the timing, the exposure, the fast-track recruitment—it felt a little too perfect.
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Grace's father reacted in a different way—less suspicion, more sentiment.
He didn't fully understand the depth of the opportunity Grace had been offered, nor did he particularly like the idea of his daughter diving deeper into dangerous work. Secretly, he had always hoped she'd take over the family electronics shop one day. Something stable. Something safe.
But when she told him about the honor, about the recognition and the official offer, he didn't voice any concern.
Instead, he smiled gently and said, "I don't get it all. But I'm proud of you."
That was enough for Grace.
They celebrated the only way the Rivers family knew how—by eating well. Her father whipped up her favorite meal, and they shared it over laughter, music, and conversation that didn't touch too deeply on the future.
Not yet.
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Ben's journey home was a little different.
For him, "home" wasn't a house with warm lights and familiar furniture. It was the orphanage—chaotic, noisy, full of energy and unspoken affection. He arrived an hour before the usual dinner rush, carrying boxes of pizza and treats he knew the kids loved.
He had already messaged the caretakers to hold off on preparing too much food. No one needed to waste effort tonight.
As the scent of cheese and tomato filled the common hall, children began flocking to him, tugging at his sleeves, crowding him with questions.
"What's the party for, Brother Ben?"
"Are you getting married ???"
Ben laughed, tousling hair and passing out slices. "Not yet. I just got a job. A real one."
The kids didn't quite grasp the full meaning, but they knew it was something to cheer for. They clapped, whooped, and shouted in celebration, even starting a chant of "Brother Ben! Brother Ben!"
Later, as the chaos settled into contented munching, one of the older caretakers approached him with a smile.
"You've always had a way of finding your place," she said. "I'm glad you found one that fits."
Ben only nodded, but his eyes spoke volumes.
He had always carried responsibility quietly. Tonight, it felt a little lighter.
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Three homes. Three different reactions.
But the same quiet truth lingered in all of them:
This opportunity—this step into something bigger—had changed the shape of their lives.
And none of them were going to ignore it.
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In the quiet of their separate rooms, once the excitement of the day had settled into silence, the trio was left alone with their thoughts. The sudden offer still hung in the air, bright and strange, and now that the rush had passed, their emotions began to stabilize—making room for contemplation.
Max stared at the ceiling, a faint smile on his lips. Curiosity had always driven him, nudging him into hidden streets and odd conversations, and now it was pointing him toward something far bigger. The influence of his father, always calm and thoughtful, lingered in his mind. Max wasn't worried about whether to join—he had already made his decision. What concerned him now was the shift it would bring to his daily life. What changes would this demand? Would he still be able to enjoy the freedom he so valued? He mulled over the idea with characteristic ease, accepting the uncertainty with a thrill rather than fear.
Ben, meanwhile, was less at peace. To anyone watching, he would have seemed his usual composed self, but the storm inside him said otherwise. The invitation stirred something deep within—something he hadn't yet named. The rush of the past investigations, the intensity of chasing down the unknown, had taken root. At first, he hadn't realized how much he craved it. Solving those two cases with Grace and Max had awakened a hunger that plain life could no longer feed. He wanted more—not for glory or escape, but for the strange satisfaction of being useful in ways that mattered. He found clarity in that. He, too, would join.
Grace sat cross-legged at her desk, a screen still glowing in front of her though she wasn't reading anymore. Her fingers hovered over the keys, unmoving. The access, the knowledge she could gain by joining—it was tempting. It would mean no longer breaking into databases and city archives by dubious means, always dancing just outside the edge of legality. With a formal position, she could chase her questions without constantly looking over her shoulder. Still, a whisper of doubt stirred, a voice from home—her father. He wanted a quiet life for her, something safe, something ordinary. She hesitated... but only briefly. His approval mattered, but so did the truth: she wasn't built for safety. She wanted the truth, the thrill, the story beneath the surface. She remembered the words he had spoken not long ago, and the way he had smiled at dinner even while hiding his worry. She knew then—he understood. And so had she. The decision was made.
One by one, they reached for their devices and opened the group chat. The messages began flowing almost immediately.
Max: So... anyone else thinking "yes"?
Grace: Already did.
Ben: Same, Figured it'd be boring without you two.
A pause. Then laughter emojis. Then more words—quick, excited, a little uncertain but honest. They were happy to learn they'd all chosen the same path, but none of them were surprised. In the short time they'd known each other, they'd come to recognize one another's hunger—for answers, for adventure, for something more.
Together, they would face what was coming. There were still questions to ask, and truths to uncover. But whatever the future held, they had made their decision.
They said their goodnights and signed off, the weight of the day easing into anticipation. Tomorrow, the real test would begin.
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[Location: Classified Office | Greymark's Central Command Node]
The room was dimly lit, walls lined with hardlight projectors and data nodes humming gently under the polished floor. In the center stood a single man—clean-cut, sharply dressed, with the insignia of the newly announced oversight division. He stood with arms clasped behind his back, waiting as a blue shimmer filled the air in front of him.
A figure coalesced out of the light. Holographic, but no less commanding. A tall man with iron-gray hair and eyes like cold steel regarded him from the projection.
"You made quite the announcement," the projection said, voice calm, clipped. "Their names are known now. That wasn't a small move."
"They earned it," the officer replied. "They exposed corruption in both internal affairs and the police department. The public needed something to believe in."
A pause.
"You also realize," the hologram said, "that naming them makes them targets."
The officer didn't flinch. "They were targets the moment they started digging. This only changes how open it is."
The projection gave a small nod. "So these are the prospects you're optimistic about?"
The man allowed himself a rare smile. "They're raw, But bright. A natural thinker, a quiet executor, and a hacker with more instinct than training. And... they don't quit."
"They'll need more than that," the projection replied. "The Knights may no longer be centralized, but their work hasn't become any less dangerous. The government's restructuring has scattered them. We need new blood—but not just anyone qualifies."
"They're not Knights yet," the officer said firmly. "They've only been given access to the investigation department. This is just the observation stage."
The projection narrowed his eyes. "Then observe closely. Look for cracks. Pressure creates truth. If they break, they weren't meant for this. If they rise... you know what to do."
The hologram flickered, then vanished, leaving the man standing alone in the quiet hum of the command room.
He turned back toward the wall panel, pulled up three files—Blake, Rivers, Woods. Their names now lit brighter than ever.
"Let's see what you do when the stakes get real," he murmured.
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[Location: Unknown Warehouse | Outskirts of Greymark]
The room reeked of death and rusted iron.
Bodies lay strewn in twisted piles, blood soaking into the concrete like ink into old parchment. The only sound was the slow, mechanical hum of a ceiling fan turning above the carnage.
At the center, a single man sat in a plain steel chair.
His suit was immaculate. His gloves unblemished. His smile—too wide.
Across from him, on his knees, was the last survivor. A man trembling so hard he seemed hollowed out from the inside. His mouth was gagged, but the horror in his eyes spoke volumes. He had watched everything. Watched them fall. Watched the monster before him stroll through it all like a man admiring artwork.
The suited figure tapped at his phone, still ignoring him. On the screen: a screenshot of the recent press release. The article headline. The photo from the broadcast.
The names.
Max Blake. Grace Rivers. Ben Woods.
His lips curled into something close to delight.
"Well, well," he said softly. "I am looking forward to our next game."
He slipped the phone into his pocket and leaned forward, folding his hands as he stared into the broken man's eyes.
"You see this?" he said gently. "They did this to you. The ones in power. They killed your family. Crushed your dreams. Your life didn't fall apart by chance—it was stolen."
The man trembled.
The figure crouched, voice smooth as silk.
"They deserve to pay. And no one else will serve justice for you. Not the police. Not the government. Only you."
Tears welled in the man's eyes, but he was no longer resisting.
"You will remember this truth," the man whispered. "They destroyed you. And you... will destroy them."
The broken figure on the floor nodded numbly.
"They destroyed me," he repeated hollowly. "I will destroy them."
The suited man smiled.
Then turned and walked away.
Behind him, the room was silent once more. One man left alive among the dead, and even he was no longer whole.
Only purpose remained.
And far away, three names glowed on a screen.
Marked.
Watched.
Awaited.
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