Hunter X Hunter - Reviewers Rage

I have told you guys that I am rewriting the novel feom the first dozen or two dozen chapters.

After messing around and not trying to make an one or two dimensional mc, I think I found the way to write Togiri's personality. Fang too of course even more so than Togiri, but Kuroha still is a mystery.

The other side characters except the Shadow Squad 1 aka Kaizen and the rest are little hard to keep track of, but don't forget to read the backround image chapter I released.

Short summary on everyone. Anyways, I wanted to tell you I rewrit a complete chapter and scrapped it.

'Lost x Brother' is now gone. It was the chapter where we got to know the first mention of Kastriot and his mysterious ability to absorb human's, animals and organisms.

He wiped out a few cities and that was all we knew since he couldn't be found for the last 10 years

..until recently where Togiri heard his name mentioned in Tetsura's memories.

First of all my writing was really bad, I mean I have written like 1.2 thousand words without explanation of what Togiri did in a two year time skip.

The chapter is now called 'Unseen Burden'. It makes the flow of the story more natural. I will keep doing rewrites until I Fix the whole Chrollo Lucifer encounter more.

A reader told me that it was really bad when he reached that part. I will also write newer chapters, but patience people. Once the beginning is cleaned up be ready for me to pump out chapters as if this was a full time job.

At the beginning I released like 5 chapters a week. The story still wants to break out of me so of course I will continue until I deem the story finished.