Chapter 29: Chapter 29: “The One Who Remained”
[Scene: Soulforge Core Chamber – Now]
FX: Steam hisses from shattered glass. Frost crackles underfoot. Lights flicker as if reacting to breath. 💡❄️
[Visual: Elara stands ten feet from her clone — identical face, posture, even heartbeat. But the other girl's eyes are wrong. Too calm. Too empty.]
Elara (thinking):
"She has my face."
"But that smile was never mine."
[Echo Elara – "The One Who Remained" – tilts her head, birdlike.]
[Echo]:
"You've aged well, Ariyenna. A little sun. A little fire."
"You were always better at bleeding than waiting."
[Kaelith moves in front of Elara. Blade drawn.]
[Kaelith]:
"What are you?"
[Echo] (ignoring him):
"I am what was left when you forgot. They didn't kill us all. They kept one. Me. Just in case you broke."
[Elara (low)]:
"Why?"
[Echo]:
"Because loyalty fades. But duplication… doesn't."
"If you lost faith, they would restart you."
"But you ran. You changed. You became… free."
[Echo's smile widens.]
"So I waited."
[Flash Cut – Echo's POV – years in darkness, unmoving. Watching screens. Hearing footsteps but never hearing her name.]
Echo (thinking):
"She left me behind. But her voice still echoed in mine."
[Scene: Back to present – Elara steps past Kaelith.]
[Elara]:
"I'm not here to be replaced. I came to destroy what they made me."
[Echo] (steps closer):
"Then destroy me. If that's what you are now."
[She opens her arms.]
"No weapons. No tricks. Just you… and everything they wanted you to be."
[FX: The soulblade hums louder on Elara's hip.]
[Kaelith (tense)]:
"She's taunting you."
[Elara]:
"No. She's begging."
[Visual: Echo drops to her knees. Still smiling, but eyes now glassy.]
[Echo]:
"I was the loyalty. You were the fire."
"They chose wrong. They let you burn."
"But I remember the chains. I remember loving without question."
[Elara (kneeling)]:
"You want to die, don't you?"
[Echo]:
"Not die. Merge. If you carry me… maybe the voices will be quiet again."
[FX: Low rumble. The lab trembles.]
[Kaelith]:
"This place is destabilizing. We need to go—"
[Echo (interrupts)]:
"Take me with you, Ariyenna."
[Elara, voice breaking slightly]:
"I'm not her anymore."
[Echo stands again. Final time.]
[Echo]:
"Then make it true."
[She opens her own chest — and a small shard, darker than Elara's, glows beneath her skin.]
"Take this. Burn it. Or carry it. Your choice."
[FX: She tears it from herself — no scream. Just silence. She hands it to Elara, glowing with dormant memory.]
[Kaelith (stunned)]:
"She gave it to you?"
[Elara (quietly)]:
"She gave up."
[Echo's body begins to fade — not dead. Just… unneeded.]
[Final Visual: Elara stands holding the shard. One in each hand — her own, and the Echo's.]
Elara (thinking):
"I won't carry her voice. But I'll carry her decision."
"To end the cycle."
[FX: The chamber lights die. Warning sirens begin to pulse.] 🔴🔴🔴