Chapter 53: Read through & Rewrites
The room was colder than any stage deserved, even by the sadomasochistic standards of Hollywood rehearsal halls. It was a cathedral of a space—tennis-court wide, ceiling lost in shadow, with windows running two stories up to catch whatever Los Angeles light dared slip past the warehouse skyline.
They'd arranged the folding tables in a U, cheap laminate rectangles tessellated end to end, and at each seat a neatly photocopied script, a branded water bottle, and at least three objects from the sacred trinity: coffee, highlighter, phone.
Marcus Vale sat dead center, his chair askew, spine at an obtuse angle that suggested casual surrender but actually mapped, molecule for molecule, to the optimal blood flow for the state of mind he was conjuring.
He let his arms drape, wrists loose, one booted foot braced against the table's crossbar as if ready for sudden flight. He was the only one in the room not speaking.
The air was thick with noise—actors greeting, catching up, negotiating territory with the polite violence of rival mafia dons at a funeral buffet.
The cast was eclectic: two aging British Shakespeareans in their cardigan armor; a pair of TV refugees with the haunted look of people waiting to be recast; three twenty-somethings who already knew they'd be extras in their own careers. On Marcus's right, a former child star; on his left, a jaded Broadway transplant who had once been a meme.
They all glanced at him, some with outright curiosity, others with the darting, avoidant glances you gave an ex in a supermarket line.
Even in civvies—black jeans, half-tucked dress shirt, throat raw from last night's system reset—he radiated a cold-field intensity that made the fluorescent lights above seem like they were set to "interrogation" instead of "soft focus." No one knew how to speak to him yet.
Or maybe it was just that they knew exactly how, but didn't want to be the first to break the fiction.
The director, a French Canadian with a chin sharp enough to open mail, paced up and down the interior of the U, pretending to check his phone but actually monitoring the pre-read ecosystem.
His first AD, a woman in a surgical ponytail and all-black everything, watched the clock. Every ten seconds she'd look up, scan for arrivals, then blink at Marcus as if to confirm that he hadn't evaporated.
At 10:02, the door at the far end of the hall opened with a clatter and all conversation stopped on a dime, like prey animals catching the scent of something not-yet-carnivorous but capable.
Keira Knightley entered with the aerodynamic grace of someone who was not only used to being watched, but had discovered new forms of leisure inside the gaze.
She wore a white blouse with the sleeves rolled up, a tailored corset-jacket, high-waisted navy trousers; her hair was twisted in what looked, from a distance, like an elaborate crown of sea-braids.
She moved as if the role had already invaded her posture, and if it had, she seemed to have made friends with the invader.
Her eyes, when they landed on Marcus, did not linger; but the muscle at her jaw fluttered, and he knew then that she'd already begun the game.
She took her seat without fanfare, three places down from him, and offered a smile to the table—polite, restrained, but with a flicker at the corners that said, "I see you." The rest of the cast exhaled, the tension resetting to a tolerable hum.
The director clapped his hands once, unnecessary but effective.
"Bon. Everyone, welcome. Thank you for being exactly on time, except you—" he pointed at Keira, who shrugged. "—but you are always forgiven. I am Denis, you know this already, but today, we are all on the same ship, yes? So let us begin by drowning."
The table offered its obligate chuckles, and the ritual of the table read began.
They started with the roll call, each actor reciting their name and role, a relic of the old world's need for introductions.
Marcus was last. "Vale," he said, and then, after a beat, "Jack." His accent was mid-Atlantic with a faint Caribbean fringe, but the name dropped with a weight that seemed to warp the entire air around it.
Scripts shuffled, water bottles clicked open, and the read commenced.
The early scenes were pro forma: exposition, callbacks to the original franchise, a few forced jokes that the studio had demanded as "fan anchors."
Marcus read his lines clean, no embellishment, but there was already a slippage—a slouch to the vowels, a slyness that made even the stock banter drip with something more feral.
The first hint that something was off came in scene four.
In the script, Jack is meant to parry the villain's threat with a glib comeback. Instead, Marcus read it low, almost purring:
"Why not kill me now, darling? Would save us both the embarrassment of pretending."
He let the silence linger, then winked at the villain as if letting him in on the real joke: that none of them were safe from anything.
The villain, played by the older Brit, faltered on his line, then recovered.
"We will not kill you, Sparrow. Not yet. There are debts to pay."
Marcus smiled, wide and lazy.
"Story of my life, mate."
The next scene, a sword duel—stage direction only—Marcus read it as if it were a love scene. His "Aye" came out softer, almost a hush.
In the dialogue that followed, he laced the speech with a louche intonation, accent coiling tighter, until it wasn't clear if he was teasing his opponent or seducing him.
The actors started to look at each other. A ripple of real confusion.
Keira, her eyes now fully locked on Marcus, responded with her own improvisation: she added a note of challenge, leaning in as if to whisper,
"That all you got?" The director's head snapped up; the first AD scribbled something in her notebook.
By the time they reached the first Jack-and-Elizabeth scene, the air in the rehearsal hall had changed. There was less acting and more contact sport. Keira, seeing where the wind blew, ditched her script and went off-book:
"You always did have a gift for self-preservation, Jack. Even when it meant burning every friend you'd ever made."
Marcus, without a pause, replied:
"That's the trick, love. Friends are just the ones who know which way you're running."
He let his hand drift, a lazy, predatory movement, across the table toward her. The gesture was innocent in context, but the intent was unmistakable.
Every pair of eyes in the room followed the vector of his wrist, down to the way his thumb tapped the edge of her script.
Keira let him. She turned the page, but did not pull her hand away. Instead, she flicked her gaze up and held his stare, unblinking, until the director called, "Cut."
They hadn't been reading the stage directions for three pages, but no one noticed.
The read pressed on, but the rules were gone now. Marcus began inserting pauses, glances, asides not in the text. When he laughed, it was from the chest, ragged, and it made the studio walls seem closer.
There was a line where Jack was supposed to taunt the Commodore—he delivered it half in whisper, eyes never leaving Keira:
"Ever wonder what it's like, being wanted by every soul with a grudge? Makes you appreciate the ones who chase for the sport of it."
She didn't miss a beat.
"Not everyone chases you, Jack. Some of us are just making sure you don't drown alone."
That got a real laugh, deep and surprised, from somewhere near the director.
By act break, the cast looked shell-shocked, like a roomful of strangers who'd spent the last hour in a locked elevator with a loaded pistol and a rapidly shrinking oxygen supply.
The director stood up, shaking his head, and for a moment Marcus thought he might be about to fire him. Instead, the man grinned with all thirty-two teeth and said, "Okay. Again from the top, but this time—just do what you did. Only more."
Someone, maybe the AD, said softly, "Jesus."
They re-ran the first act. It went the same way, only now the whole table leaned in. Even the old Brit, who had spent the first hour with his eyes glazed, started putting venom in his lines.
The Broadway transplant began mimicking Marcus's rhythm, shadowing the lines for when it would be his turn. The child star looked at Marcus with a mixture of worship and terror.
Marcus didn't break. He only deepened.
At noon, Denis called lunch, but no one moved. It was as if the room needed a new physics to allow the molecules to separate.
Finally, Keira stood, stretched, and walked a slow circuit behind Marcus. She didn't speak to him, not yet, but let her fingers brush his shoulder as she passed.
He let the touch burn a hole in the memory, but didn't turn around.
The script lay open in front of him. He could see, already, the places he would change it. He would bleed the lines, crack them open, let the character seep out through the margins.
The director approached, arms folded, eyes bright with a kind of madness that only the very bored or the very ambitious carried.
"You know what you're doing, yes?"
Marcus shrugged, let the accent bleed through.
"Not a clue, mate. Just following the wind."
The director beamed.
"Good. That's all I wanted."
He turned, then, to the room, and said, "Everyone, this is the new Jack. Please destroy your scripts."
They all laughed, thinking it was a joke. But as the words echoed, the actors glanced at each other, waiting for permission to believe it.
In the chill of the rehearsal hall, Marcus watched them, watched the future rewrite itself in real time. He could feel the System, deep in his spine, purring like an engine ready for the next escalation.
And for the first time since the audition, he allowed himself to think: Maybe this was going to work.
Maybe they'd all drown together.
...
Anne Hathaway's POV:
Anne Hathaway watched the footage on a device that seemed designed not for pleasure, but for the efficient delivery of pain.
The screen, oversized for a tablet but too small for real comfort, perched on the slab of her kitchen island, its blue light casting her face in colors borrowed from crime scenes. She wore a wool sweater with thumbholes, hair clipped back so nothing would distract from the forensics.
It was close to sunset, the city outside already fading into a honeyed dusk. The windows, wall-to-wall along her condo's northern edge, let in the last light like an intravenous drip—thin, slow, sustaining just enough to keep her upright.
She'd killed the overheads, wanting the room to feel both less and more like a theater. The only other illumination was the cold grid of the induction stove, where a saucepan of untouched soup burbled, then went silent, the smart burner cycling itself off out of either mercy or insult.
She had watched the rehearsal three times before, always at a professional's remove: noting the beats, the blockings, the moments where Marcus made a choice that wasn't in the script. But this time she let herself see it as a civilian, a person with skin in the game.
She watched the moment Keira entered. The way Marcus barely moved but the air around him went sharp. The first lines, casual, but with an undertow of something else.
She hit pause and rolled back the feed, frame-by-frame: watched his fingers, the corner of his mouth, the tick in his left cheek that was not in any Joker performance she'd ever seen.
She pressed play again, watched as the read went feral, as the rest of the cast fell under the spell. By scene four, the old Jack was dead.
By the end of act one, Marcus's face wasn't even trying to return to neutral between his lines. He stayed Jack, all the way through the coffee break and half the lunch hour.
Anne's pulse accelerated, a dry, hot, medical thump. She recognized the look: not the hunger of a man, but the acceleration of a falling object. He'd found the gradient and let himself tip in.
She pinched the bridge of her nose, then reached for her phone, thumbing in a number she knew by heart but rarely used.
The contact read: NOLAN, CHRISTOPHER. She let it ring twice, then once more, then felt the familiar suture of tension at the bridge of her skull when his voice answered.
"Yes?" The tone was exactly the same as in person: calm, almost gently British, but with a glint of steel just below the cordiality.
She cut to the chase. "He's changing."
Nolan didn't answer immediately. She imagined him standing in a concrete office somewhere in the hills, script pages spread out like blueprints, one hand curled around an unlit cigarette for the tactile memory.
"You mean Marcus, or Jack?"
"Both," she said.
"But mostly Marcus. I just watched the table read. He's not coming out of it, Chris. Not even between takes."
A paper shuffle, maybe a page turned.
"You said this last time."
"This is different," she said, more forceful than she meant.
"With the Joker, it was method, immersion, but he could still switch off. He'd do the interviews, the makeup tests, the interviews again—he always returned to neutral. But now…" She stared at the paused image: Marcus, hand on the table, jaw forward, eyes half-lidded but gleaming.
"He's gone somewhere."
She waited for comfort, or at least for doubt.
Nolan's answer came after a microbeat.
"I think it's good. He's adapting. You know how difficult it is to follow up a performance like his Joker with anything less than a reinvention. Maybe this is what he needs."
Anne blinked at the screen, at the parallax of Marcus and Keira, both blurred by motion but somehow the center of gravity for the entire frame.
"Did you watch their scene together?"
A slow exhale, almost a laugh.
"Yes. She keeps up with him. Better than I expected."
Anne said nothing.
"You're worried," Nolan observed, his voice dropping half an octave, as if the distance could render it intimate.
Anne turned away from the island, phone pinned between her cheek and shoulder, and gazed out at the city's arterial lights.
"He's… I don't know. He's not who I remember." She let that hang in the room, then added, "He's not who anyone remembers."
Nolan shifted again, the sound crisp and final.
"Sometimes the role is bigger than the actor. Sometimes the actor decides he likes it that way." He let that hang. "Will you be all right?"
"I'm fine," Anne said, but she didn't recognize the voice that came out of her. "Just promise me you'll keep an eye on the production."
"Of course," Nolan said, already somewhere else.
"Try to rest."
She thumbed the call dead. The room was instantly empty, the only sound the faint, cooling click of the induction burner. Anne set the phone down and returned to the tablet. She replayed the Jack-and-Elizabeth scene. She watched it twice, then let it run in slow motion.
She studied Marcus's face, every muscle, every fractional twitch. She watched Keira's hand, how it drifted to the edge of his sleeve, how her fingers didn't quite make contact, then finally did.
She watched the aftermath, the way Marcus's mouth stayed open a fraction too long after the laugh.
Anne found the freeze-frame that haunted her most and left it up, the two of them mid-scene, in the middle of a perfect, dangerous nowhere.
She pressed her palm flat against the glass. The screen was warm.
The city below flickered, the sun long gone.
In the blue dark, Anne stared at the image, waiting for the trick of light that would let her see herself in it.
It never came.
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