Naruto: The Unsealed Path

Chapter 16: The Quiet Genius and the Copy Ninja II



They passed a training field where a few Genin sparred under their sensei's watchful gaze. Guy waved enthusiastically. One of them waved back, awkwardly. The others simply stared, unsure how to process the vibrant green phenomenon skipping past them with a small boy in tow.

By the time they reached the secluded training ground near the edge of the forest, Haruki had adjusted to the sense of being watched. It wasn't paranoia—just a quiet certainty. His instincts had been right before.

Still, when he looked back?

No one.

Just the wind stirring the trees and the faint hush of leaves brushing together like whispered secrets.

He stepped onto the grass, the familiar texture beneath his feet grounding him.

Here, finally, was space. Stillness. A sanctuary from the noise of the academy, the questions, the glances. Here, it didn't matter that he didn't have the Byakugan. That he was quiet. Strange. Out of sync.

Here, he could move freely.

Guy clapped his hands, grinning like a man about to set the world record for enthusiasm-induced aneurysm.

"Now, Haruki!" he cried. "Show me the might of your silent flame!"

Haruki sighed, dropped his bag by the edge of the field, and stepped forward. His posture straightened. His expression didn't change—but something in him did.

Time to stop pretending the world was still boring.

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The clearing was quiet.

Here, even the air seemed to hush itself. The rustle of the trees framed the space like a barrier, the village noise fading into the distance behind layers of foliage and summer haze. In the center of the grassy field, Haruki stood with arms loose at his sides, expression unreadable.

Across from him, Guy cracked his neck once to the left, once to the right, then grinned. "Alright! Time for our warm-up!" he boomed. "One hundred squats! Followed by fifty push-ups, then—!"

"Can we skip the screaming part?" Haruki asked flatly, already dropping into a squat.

Guy paused, hand frozen in a dramatic fist. Then, with a proud sniff, he adjusted his stance. "Ah! So cool, so reserved, so disciplined! The fire burns quiet in you, but I feel it! Yes! Let's begin."

Haruki didn't reply. He didn't need to. He was already halfway through his squats by the time Guy stopped talking.

They moved in practiced rhythm. Haruki's form was perfect—economical, balanced, precise. Guy, by contrast, moved with explosive energy, every motion a statement of his conviction. Watching them side by side was like watching a storm next to a lake: same sky, different expression.

After the warm-up, Guy motioned for Haruki to take position across the field.

"Now," Guy said, voice unusually focused. "Let's see how far you've come."

Haruki nodded. No words. He exhaled slowly, the chakra in his core settling like ink in still water. Then, with a sharp breath, he flicked his fingers.

A stone and a kunai on opposite ends of the field vanished—and reappeared, swapped midair.

The air shimmered faintly, like heat over stone. Space twisted with a near-invisible pulse, and then stilled again.

Guy let out a long whistle. "I'll never get used to that. It's like watching the laws of nature do a cartwheel."

Haruki flicked his fingers again. This time, he swapped two targets on the training dummies behind Guy. Then, emboldened, he lifted a pair of weighted practice rings with chakra, threw them into the air—and swapped them mid-fall.

The flicker was stronger this time. Like a brief tug at the edges of reality.

Guy clapped, beaming. "Amazing! Graceful! Controlled! Youthfully mysterious!"

Haruki exhaled, shoulders rising and falling. His fingers tingled. That odd sensation was back—like he wasn't just moving objects, but brushing against… something else.

Guy crossed his arms. "Have you tried more complex materials yet? Wood and metal together, maybe?"

Haruki nodded, eyes narrowed. "They take longer. I think… not because of mass. It's how they interact. Some things resist. Like the air doesn't want them to move."

Guy scratched his chin. "Chakra resonance?"

"Maybe. Or maybe it's me."

Without waiting for permission, Haruki raised both hands. He targeted a nearby training post and a loose pile of stones. With careful focus, he extended his chakra in two invisible threads.

Flick.

The stones and the post glowed briefly. They tried to switch—there was a shimmer, a strange distortion—and then nothing. A jarring snap like stretched rubber yanking back, and the energy recoiled. Haruki staggered back a step, wincing, a spike of pressure stabbing behind his eyes.

Guy was beside him instantly, catching his shoulder. "Whoa! Are you alright?"

Haruki rubbed his temple. "It's… like a wall. Big things feel heavier than they are."

"Limits," Guy said gently. "Even genius has to respect them."

Haruki didn't answer right away. He watched the rippling air where the failed swap had tried to happen. The world looked normal—but he knew something under the surface had buckled. Just for a moment. It made his skin prickle.

Silence stretched between them.

Then, Haruki took a slow step forward, crouched beside the swapped training dummy, and examined the scorch-like ring where space had flickered.

"Before," he said quietly, "I thought it was just distance or weight. But… now I think there are places that are harder to reach. Like the space doesn't want to open."

Guy's eyes softened. "Haruki."

Haruki turned, meeting his teacher's gaze.

"Don't push too fast," Guy said, with a rare seriousness. "You've already come farther than most shinobi do in a decade. And you've done it alone."

Haruki's mouth twitched faintly. Not quite a smile. "Not alone."

That earned a gleam in Guy's eyes. "YES! That's the spirit of youth!"

Haruki sighed, then stood.

They resumed drills—Guy calling out attacks, Haruki dodging and countering. When Guy faked a roundhouse, Haruki snatched up a pebble and, with a quick flick, swapped it with a stone near Guy's feet. The sudden shift threw off Guy's balance just enough for Haruki to slip behind him, dropping into a ready stance before Guy could react.

"YOSH!" Guy spun, laughing. "Using the earth itself to trick me? Brilliant!"

Haruki shrugged. "Felt fair. You were holding back."

Guy gave a playful pout. "You wound me!"

Then—grinning again—he tossed his headband into the air as a distraction and lunged for Haruki.

Haruki smirked faintly and flicked his fingers.

Guy's headband reappeared tied around the leg of a nearby post.

The same moment, Guy crashed into that same post with a dramatic "oof!"

"…Did you just pickpocket-swap me?" he called from the ground.

Haruki crossed his arms. "You dropped your guard."

Guy's laughter echoed through the trees.

But just as Haruki allowed himself to relax, something shifted.

He tried another small swap—two pebbles midair—but as they exchanged, the space between them rippled, and a pressure filled his head. Not pain. Not chakra depletion. Something bigger. Older. Like his power had tapped into something deep and dangerous.

He stumbled.

This time, Guy didn't laugh.

"You okay?"

Haruki stood straight, forced his expression neutral. "Just… the youth rebelling again."

Guy didn't press.

But as Haruki turned away, hand brushing the air where the ripple had formed, he felt it again—that pull. Like the space wasn't empty. Like something out there had noticed.

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The sky had begun to deepen into that early golden hue where sunlight brushed treetops in soft bronze. Haruki stood still beneath a swaying branch, feeling the residual hum of displaced chakra settle back into the world like a bell tone fading. His head no longer throbbed, but that odd spatial tingle clung to his fingertips.

He heard it before he saw it.

"My eternal rival approaches…" Guy's voice dropped to a whisper, but it was still theatrical. He turned to face the treetops like an actor expecting thunderous applause. "I can sense his stylish apathy… and the scent of cheap romance novels."

Sure enough, a rustle of leaves announced the arrival of Hatake Kakashi—perched on a high branch, one knee bent lazily, a familiar orange book open in his left hand. He looked like he'd been reading for hours and had only just realized where he was.

Haruki's first impression: gravity didn't seem to apply to this man. Nor did urgency. Or possibly dress codes. His mask covered half his face, his headband was tilted to the side, and his visible eye remained half-lidded like he might fall asleep mid-sentence.

"Yo," Kakashi greeted, flipping a page. "Nice weather for youth."

Haruki blinked.

Guy struck a pose. "KAKASHI! How DARE you make a youthful training session wait while indulging in—that unholy text!"

Kakashi held the book up like a shield. "Icha Icha Paradise is a delicate and nuanced literary work, Guy. You should try reading it sometime. It might help you chill."

Guy growled. Haruki looked between them, expression unchanged.

"Is this normal?" Haruki asked dryly.

"Normal?" Guy repeated, fists trembling. "This—this is the FIERY BATTLE OF IDEALS!"

Kakashi dropped from the tree without a sound, landing in a crouch and standing as if bored of gravity again. He turned to Haruki and, in a motion as smooth as sleight of hand, produced a second pair of dark-lensed sunglasses from his flak vest and handed them over.

"Here," he said. "To protect yourself from Guy's blinding optimism."

Haruki took them without hesitation, slid them on, and said, "Everything looks less loud now."

Even Guy choked on a laugh.

Kakashi lowered his book, just a little. "So, this is the quiet genius I've heard so much about."

"I prefer 'underwhelming genius,'" Haruki replied.

Kakashi tilted his head. "Modest. Suspicious."

Guy's chest swelled. "Haruki here is the most dedicated student of mine—humble, focused, untapped springtime potential!"

"Uh-huh." Kakashi wasn't really listening. He flipped to the next page of his book.

But the moment Guy mentioned Haruki's unique training, Kakashi's eye sharpened. Just a flicker. Haruki noticed it instantly. He was used to watching expressions, not people.

"Unique how?" Kakashi asked, closing his book one-third of the way—just enough to say I'm listening now, but don't flatter yourself.

Guy grinned. "He's got a little trick. You'll see."

Haruki narrowed his eyes. Guy hadn't meant to expose anything concrete. But Kakashi was too sharp—he was already connecting dots.

Kakashi leaned forward slightly, lowering the book completely. "A trick, huh? Does it involve summoning dramatic gusts of wind like you?"

"No," Haruki said.

"Disguising training weights as fashion accessories?"

"Also no."

"Copying your teacher's eyebrows out of admiration?"

Haruki deadpanned, "My self-preservation instincts are stronger than that."

Guy made an exaggerated gasp. "Such deadpan defiance! Truly the next generation is blooming with flair!"

Haruki ignored him.

Kakashi's visible eye crinkled. "Okay. You're funny. I like that."

But behind the casual words, Haruki could feel the shift. Kakashi wasn't just amused. He was interested. Reading him. Measuring.

Haruki didn't flinch. He knew how to deal with probing eyes. He'd been a Hyūga once. Sort of.

Kakashi turned toward Guy. "You said he had talent. But you didn't say it was dangerous."

Guy's smile faltered—just for a split second. Then he placed a firm hand on Haruki's shoulder. "Dangerous? Never. Just… unconventional."

Kakashi nodded slowly, gaze returning to Haruki. "Well. I do enjoy unconventional."

He tucked his book away, expression unreadable again. "Let's see it, then. This… talent of yours."

Haruki stared at him.

"You don't even know what it is yet."

"That's what makes it fun."


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