Chapter 3: Assessment Gambit
The Chen family's main hall buzzed with nervous energy as Wei approached. Three generations of clan members had gathered, from his youngest cousins barely old enough to walk to the weathered elders who remembered when the family first allied with the Heavenly Sword Sect.
At the center of it all sat Chen Tianming, Wei's grandfather, radiating the kind of presence that made reality itself seem more solid around him. His Nascent Soul cultivation was a weight in the air that younger family members felt in their bones—a constant reminder of the peak they all aspired to reach.
"Ah, there's our missing participant," Grandfather announced as Wei entered, his voice carrying easily across the hall without seeming loud. "Chen Wei, please join the other candidates."
Wei's stomach churned as dozens of eyes turned toward him. His cousins and younger siblings stood in neat rows, each radiating various degrees of spiritual energy that Wei could now, barely, sense. Even the weakest among them glowed like candles compared to his flickering ember.
"Apologies for my tardiness, Grandfather," Wei said, bowing respectfully. His newly awakened spiritual sensitivity let him feel the old man's attention like a physical weight.
"Tardiness can be forgiven," Grandfather replied, his pale eyes studying Wei with uncomfortable intensity. "Lack of effort cannot. I trust you've made some progress in your cultivation this year?"
The hall fell silent. Everyone knew Wei's history—eighteen years of complete failure to sense even the faintest whisper of spiritual energy. The annual assessments had become exercises in public humiliation, with Wei standing mutely while his relatives displayed their growing power.
But this year was different.
"I have, Grandfather," Wei said, trying to project confidence he didn't entirely feel. "I believe I've finally found a cultivation method that suits my... unique circumstances."
Murmurs rippled through the crowd. Chen Feng, standing with the other second-generation members, looked surprised but hopeful. Their father, Chen Baoxing, wore the expression of a man who'd been disappointed too many times to believe easily.
"Indeed?" Grandfather's eyebrow rose fractionally. "How fascinating. Elder Liu, would you be so kind as to examine young Wei's progress?"
Wei's heart nearly stopped. Elder Liu Shen stepped forward from where he'd been observing quietly—a guest from the Heavenly Sword Sect whose Soul Transformation cultivation made even Grandfather seem approachable by comparison.
The Elder was an ancient man whose eyes held the depth of someone who'd lived for centuries. When he looked at Wei, it felt like being examined under a microscope by someone who could see through flesh and bone to the soul beneath.
"Certainly," Elder Liu said, his voice like wind through mountain peaks. "Young Chen Wei, please circulate your spiritual energy. Show us what you've accomplished."
This was it. The moment of truth.
Wei closed his eyes and reached for the trickle of energy flowing through his meridians. It was pathetically small—barely enough to register—but it was real. He guided it through the basic circulation pattern every cultivator learned as children, the energy flowing from his dantian through his primary meridians and back.
The gasps from the crowd told him it was working.
"Extraordinary," Elder Liu murmured, stepping closer. "Chen Wei, when did this breakthrough occur?"
"Recently, Elder," Wei replied carefully. "I've been... experimenting with alternative cultivation methods."
"Alternative methods?" Grandfather's voice carried a sharp edge. "What exactly have you been practicing, child?"
Wei's mind raced. He'd prepared for this question, but having every eye in the hall focused on him made thinking clearly difficult. The system interface flickered at the edge of his vision, displaying a helpful reminder:
[COVER STORY RECOMMENDATION: Ancient inheritance discovery. Maintains mystery while explaining unusual abilities.]
"I found something, Grandfather," Wei said, letting a note of wonder enter his voice. "In the old storage areas beneath my courtyard. A jade slip with cultivation techniques I'd never seen before."
The hall erupted in excited whispers. Ancient inheritances were rare but not unheard of—powerful cultivators sometimes left behind hidden teachings for worthy descendants to discover.
"A jade slip?" Elder Liu's eyes sharpened with interest. "May I examine it?"
Panic flashed through Wei's mind before the system provided another helpful suggestion:
[SOLUTION: Create basic formation array to demonstrate 'inherited' knowledge. Cost: 25 CP. Warning: Advanced techniques may raise suspicion.]
"The slip... dissolved after I learned its contents, Elder," Wei said smoothly. "But it taught me more than just basic cultivation. It contained formation knowledge as well."
"Formation arrays?" Grandfather leaned forward, genuine interest replacing skepticism. "Demonstrate."
Wei nodded, trying to look confident while internally screaming. He'd never created a formation in either life, but the system was already feeding him instructions. He stepped to an open area of the hall and began moving his hands in precise patterns, letting spiritual energy flow through his fingers.
[BASIC ILLUSION FORMATION ACTIVATED] [COST: 25 CP] [EFFECT: Minor light manipulation and sensory enhancement]
Light began to shimmer around Wei's hands, coalescing into simple geometric patterns that hung in the air like glowing diagrams. It wasn't flashy, but it was undeniably real formation work—the kind of precise energy manipulation that took years to master.
The silence in the hall was deafening.
"Impossible," someone whispered.
Elder Liu's eyes widened as he studied the formation. "This is... sophisticated work. The energy efficiency is remarkable, and the pattern stability..." He trailed off, walking closer to examine Wei's creation.
Wei held his breath as the Elder extended his spiritual sense toward the formation. For a terrifying moment, he thought the ancient cultivator would detect the system's artificial enhancement.
Instead, Elder Liu nodded approvingly. "Genuine formation mastery. Whoever created that jade slip was no ordinary cultivator." He turned to Grandfather. "Chen Tianming, your grandson has stumbled upon something significant."
"So it would seem," Grandfather replied, his voice carefully neutral. "Wei, dismiss the formation and join me privately after the assessment concludes."
Wei let the lights fade, trying not to show his relief. He'd passed the first test, but he could see the questions forming in every observer's mind. How had the family failure suddenly developed not just cultivation ability, but advanced formation skills?
"Remarkable progress," Elder Liu announced to the hall. "Chen Wei has clearly found a path suited to his talents. I look forward to seeing how far this development takes him."
The assessment continued with Wei's cousins and siblings, but the atmosphere had changed. Where before his presence had been an embarrassing formality, now he was the center of speculation and whispered conversations.
His cousin Chen Li, a promising talent two years older, approached during a break between demonstrations. "Wei, what you did... I've been studying formations for three years and I can barely manage a basic light array. How did you learn such advanced techniques so quickly?"
"Lucky inheritance," Wei replied with what he hoped was an appropriately mysterious smile. "Sometimes the ancestors provide exactly what we need."
But Li's expression remained skeptical. "That formation pattern... I've never seen anything like it. Are you sure it came from a traditional source?"
Before Wei could answer, Grandfather's voice cut across the hall. "Chen Wei, attend me. Now."
The crowd parted as Wei walked toward his grandfather's seat. Elder Liu stood beside the old patriarch, both men wearing expressions that mixed curiosity with wariness.
"Grandfather," Wei said, bowing again.
"Walk with me," Grandfather commanded, rising from his chair. "Elder Liu, if you would join us?"
They left the buzzing crowd behind, walking through corridors Wei had known since childhood toward Grandfather's private study. But everything felt different now—charged with potential and danger in equal measure.
"Wei," Grandfather said once they were alone, "I want you to understand something. What you demonstrated today... it's not just impressive. It's unprecedented. Formation mastery of that level typically requires decades of study."
"I'm as surprised as anyone, Grandfather," Wei replied honestly. "The knowledge from the jade slip felt like remembering something I'd always known."
Elder Liu nodded thoughtfully. "Ancient inheritances sometimes work that way. Direct knowledge transfer rather than gradual learning." He paused, studying Wei intently. "But I'm curious about the specific techniques you displayed. The energy efficiency was... unusual. Almost as if the formations were designed by someone who understood cultivation from a completely different perspective."
Wei's blood ran cold, but he kept his expression neutral. "Different how, Elder?"
"More systematic. Mathematical, almost." Elder Liu's eyes narrowed slightly. "Tell me, young Wei, did your mysterious inheritance include any other... unconventional insights?"
This was dangerous territory. Wei could feel both men's attention focused on him like laser beams, waiting for any sign of deception or hidden knowledge.
[SYSTEM ADVISORY: Recommend partial truth disclosure. Complete denial may arouse more suspicion than controlled revelation.]
"There were... theories, Elder," Wei said carefully. "Ways of thinking about cultivation that I'd never encountered before. The inheritance spoke of treating spiritual energy like... like a resource to be optimized rather than simply accumulated."
"Optimization," Grandfather repeated slowly. "Interesting terminology."
"And what conclusions did you draw from these theories?" Elder Liu pressed.
Wei took a deep breath. This was the crucial moment—the point where he either convinced them or raised suspicions that could bring his whole deception crashing down.
"That most cultivators waste enormous amounts of energy through inefficient techniques," he said. "The inheritance showed me ways to achieve better results with less spiritual power. It's why I can perform formation work despite my low cultivation level."
Both men exchanged glances that Wei couldn't interpret.
"Demonstrate," Grandfather commanded. "Create another formation, but this time, explain your process."
Wei's hands moved almost automatically, the system guiding his movements while he spoke. "Traditional formation creation relies on overwhelming power to force stability. But if you understand the underlying energy patterns..." Light began to coalesce around his fingers. "You can achieve the same result with precise manipulation instead of brute force."
The formation that emerged was more complex than his previous attempt—a three-dimensional mandala of interconnected light patterns that pulsed with controlled energy.
"Remarkable," Elder Liu breathed. "The power efficiency is at least three times better than conventional methods. Who was the cultivator who left this inheritance? Such innovative thinking..."
"The jade slip didn't identify its creator, Elder," Wei lied smoothly. "But the techniques it contained were clearly the work of a master."
"Indeed." Grandfather's expression was unreadable. "Wei, I want you to understand the position this places you in. Knowledge of this caliber... it will attract attention. Some of it unwelcome."
"What do you mean, Grandfather?"
"Powerful formations and cultivation innovations have a way of interesting people who believe such knowledge should belong to them," Elder Liu explained. "If word of your abilities spreads beyond the family..."
"It could put both you and the clan at risk," Grandfather finished. "We must be very careful about how we proceed."
Wei felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. "Are you saying I should hide what I've learned?"
"Not hide," Grandfather said thoughtfully. "But perhaps... develop gradually. Allow your abilities to grow in stages rather than revealing everything at once."
"A wise approach," Elder Liu agreed. "Though I confess, I'm eager to see what other insights your inheritance might contain. Would you be willing to share your knowledge with the sect's formation specialists?"
[WARNING: External attention from major sect detected. Recommend extreme caution in knowledge sharing.]
"I would be honored, Elder," Wei replied, while internally screaming at the complications that were multiplying around him. "Though I should mention, much of the knowledge feels... instinctive now. Difficult to put into words."
"That's common with direct inheritance," Elder Liu nodded. "We'll proceed slowly. Perhaps you could work with our junior formation disciples, sharing what insights feel natural to express."
"I'll do my best to serve the sect, Elder."
"Excellent." Elder Liu smiled, but Wei caught a calculating gleam in his ancient eyes. "I think this is the beginning of a very interesting partnership, young Chen Wei."
As they walked back toward the main hall, Wei's mind raced with the implications of what had just happened. His simple plan to avoid humiliation had evolved into something far more complex. Now he had to maintain his cover story while living up to increasingly high expectations.
The system interface flickered with an update:
[NEW QUEST CHAIN INITIATED: Manage External Attention] [OBJECTIVE 1: Establish credible knowledge progression] [OBJECTIVE 2: Avoid detection by high-level cultivators] [OBJECTIVE 3: Build power base sufficient for independence] [WARNING: Failure may result in forced recruitment or hostile investigation]
Wei sighed internally. He'd wanted to prove he wasn't worthless. Instead, he'd painted a target on himself and his entire family.
"Grandfather," he said quietly, "what exactly have I gotten us into?"
The old man's smile was grim. "That, my boy, remains to be seen. But one thing is certain—your life as the family disappointment is officially over."
They rejoined the crowd to find the assessment continuing, but Wei noticed the change immediately. Where before he'd been ignored or pitied, now family members watched him with a mixture of respect, curiosity, and calculation.
His second brother Chen Feng approached with an expression Wei had never seen before—genuine pride.
"Little brother," Feng said quietly, "I owe you an apology. I never imagined... what you showed today was incredible."
"Just lucky, Second Brother," Wei replied, uncomfortable with the attention.
"Luck?" Feng shook his head. "That was skill. Real skill." He lowered his voice. "Father's been negotiating a better position for our branch of the family with the sect elders. What you've demonstrated today... it changes everything."
Wei felt another weight settle on his shoulders. His breakthrough wasn't just about him anymore—it was affecting the entire family's political situation.
[SYSTEM NOTICE: Host's actions have triggered multiple chain reactions. Monitoring 47 separate political and social variables. Recommend preparation for accelerated timeline.]
"What kind of changes?" Wei asked, though he suspected he didn't want to know.
"The kind that make people take notice," Feng replied. "Good and bad."
Before Wei could ask for clarification, Elder Liu's voice cut through the crowd noise.
"The assessment is complete," the Elder announced. "I'm pleased to report that this year's candidates show exceptional promise. Particularly..." His gaze found Wei across the room. "Young Chen Wei, whose recent breakthrough demonstrates the value of perseverance and... creative thinking."
Polite applause filled the hall, but Wei could feel the undercurrents of speculation and calculation beneath the surface. He'd succeeded in proving his worth, but at what cost?
As the crowd began to disperse, Wei found himself surrounded by family members eager to congratulate him or fish for details about his mysterious inheritance. He answered questions with vague pleasantries while his mind worked furiously on the larger problem.
The system had given him power, but using it had created a web of expectations and dangers he was only beginning to understand. Every success would bring more attention, more scrutiny, more pressure to reveal secrets he couldn't afford to share.
[QUEST UPDATE: Survive increased family expectations] [TIME LIMIT: Until next public demonstration] [ESTIMATED DEADLINE: 24-72 hours]
Wei managed to excuse himself from the crowd and made his way back toward his courtyard, mind spinning with plans and contingencies. He needed to get stronger, faster, but without attracting even more dangerous attention.
Behind him, he could hear Elder Liu's voice carrying across the hall: "Chen Tianming, I believe we should discuss arrangements for young Wei's continued development. The sect would be very interested in nurturing such... innovative talent."
Wei quickened his pace. The game was getting more complicated by the hour, and he was starting to realize that his biggest challenge wouldn't be mastering the system—it would be surviving the consequences of his own success.