The Place Between Worlds

Chapter 23: The Thing That Waits



The sound hadn't returned.

But the memory of it—low, guttural, not wind—clung like frost to every word that morning. No one spoke unless they had to. Even firewood was stacked quieter.

Vince hadn't slept. Not well. He'd lain still, wrapped in three layers, listening to the silence outside the shelter. But silence wasn't safety anymore. It was pause.

When Eldan entered, he didn't ask permission. He just met Vince's eyes and nodded once—grim. Then turned and led him out into the thinning gray light.

The storm had stopped days ago. The snow had hardened since. But now, something heavier pressed against the village. Not cold. Not hunger. Not wind.

It was knowing.

And knowing meant fear.

Eldan brought Vince to the trench's edge, where the drifted snow had been cleared back just enough to reveal the prints.

Long. Wide. Deep.

Pressed so firm into the earth, even the cold hadn't filled them in. Not a deer. Not a boar. And too quiet for a bear.

Vince crouched, resting heavily on his stick. Eldan pointed at the claw marks near the edge of the paw. Five points. Spaced wide.

"Not hunt," Eldan said. "Not chase. Walk."

He gestured again. Slow. Deliberate.

Tracking them backward, the path wove in and out from the tree line—not a straight approach, but circling.

"Watching," Vince muttered.

Eldan didn't correct him.

They followed in silence, just a few steps. Loris joined them, spear ready, shoulders tense. His breath fogged the air in sharp bursts.

At the edge of the trees, the trail curved sharply—then vanished.

Gone. No blood. No scuffle. Just snow and wind and trees so silent they almost felt ashamed.

Eldan glanced at Vince.

"Too smart," he said. "Too quiet."

Vince didn't move. "Still here?"

Eldan said nothing.

But his hand went to the blade on his hip.

And that was answer enough.

 

They returned to the main shelter by midday. Quiet. Tense.

No children were outside. No elders near the entrance. The village had already sensed the change. Even those who hadn't seen the prints had felt the air shift—something in the rhythm of the cold, in the way the forest listened now instead of spoke.

Inside, the fire still burned—but lower. Fuel was rationed again. Voices dropped to whispers. Movement slowed not from fatigue but caution.

Vince ducked into the dim warmth, and Maela rose from the fire circle, brushing soot from her sleeves. She didn't speak, only gestured toward the map scratched onto the bark wall—charcoal lines fading where hands had touched them too often.

The outer paths were marked, hunting loops and supply routes. But a new mark curved around the southern edge now. A dark arc. A watcher's trail.

The path of the creature.

Vince moved closer. His eyes scanned the pattern. Broad circles. No rush. No direction toward a kill. Just orbit.

"He watches," Vince said under his breath. "Not hungry. Not yet. Just… close."

Maela gave a slow nod. "Waits."

Ferren, hunched near the tool wall, muttered, "Then we don't wait."

Vince's hand tightened on his walking stick. "No trap," he said. "Not yet. If it tests us and we fail…"

He didn't finish.

Maela did. "Then it comes in."

They all understood. The threat wasn't in speed. It was in patience. In calculation.

Predators that circled were more dangerous than those that lunged. They chose moments. They studied.

"We change pattern," Vince said finally. "No soft gaps."

He turned to Eldan. "Food first. Guarded."

Eldan blinked. "All food?"

"All," Vince said. "No pile. No open sacks. Move to center hut. Roofed. Two guards, full shift. No children. No young voice. No easy steal."

Eldan nodded. "I make list."

"No tools left outside," Vince added. "No rope. No sticks. Nothing it could use."

Maela raised an eyebrow. "Use?"

Vince didn't look at her. "Too smart to leave chance."

It sounded paranoid.

No one disagreed.

They shifted quickly into new motion. Quiet but sharp.

Branik and Marek were chosen to guard the food first. Broad-shouldered and watchful, they stood over the central hut's door like carved stone. Inside, all dried root, wrapped meat, and foraged berries were re-bundled and re-stored under bark mats.

Not buried. Just hidden from the dark.

No one would eat alone now.

No one would wander to snack or steal.

Even Ferren—usually impatient—offered to take second watch without being asked.

Maela passed Vince a short, thin spear, little more than a reed shaft with a knapped stone point. "Night walk?"

He nodded. "Three groups. Small. Full circle."

"Torches?"

"No. Low fire. Just enough to see."

Eldan approached again. "Children stay inside. No fire near edge. All flame close."

Vince agreed. "Small light. Big silence."

It was strategy. But more than that, it was instinct.

The same instinct that had kept him alive through alley ambushes in Naples. The kind that knew when not to reach for the gun—when to wait. To vanish.

This wasn't a storm.

This was a shadow.

Something testing the edges of their world, inch by inch.

The new patrol was drawn up quickly—Loris, Ferren, Maela, and Eldan each leading a small group of two or three adults. Spread wide, slow routes. They would watch for broken snow, scent trails, claw marks. No heroics. Just eyes and time.

No children were told. Only quietly kept closer.

Even Joran, who often tried to sit near the fire rings at night with the older teens, was kept inside the main shelter by silent insistence. No arguments. He understood.

Everyone did.

Because sometimes the fear wasn't what you saw.

It was what hadn't moved yet.

What you knew was just waiting.

And as the last patrol left, firelight flickering on sharpened reeds and tired eyes, Vince sat down near the center of the village.

He didn't speak. He didn't sleep.

He listened.

The wind didn't howl.

It breathed.

Long, slow exhalations through the trees, rustling frost and bark, whispering against stretched hides and reed seams. The kind of sound that didn't startle—but unsettled. Made you strain to hear more.

Vince stayed near the center. A fire flickered low beside him, all movement orange and tired. Across the clearing, patrols circled slow. No voices. Only footsteps in the snow.

Then—just past midnight—came the sound again.

A low crunch. A shift. Not close. But not far enough.

Every head turned.

Eldan froze mid-step. Ferren stiffened near the food shelter, hand on his stick.

Another sound followed.

Not a growl. Not a snarl.

Just breath.

Long and hoarse. The kind of breath that comes from heavy lungs, something larger than it should be. Something slow.

Ferren turned to Vince, eyes wide. Vince just shook his head, a small, controlled motion.

No movement. No light.

They waited.

Minutes passed.

Nothing.

Then—a click.

Like bone on wood.

Or claw on stone.

But again, too far to chase. Too close to ignore.

The fire burned lower. Sparks flared and died.

No one spoke. Even the night patrols pulled tighter toward the center. Not retreat. Not fear.

Just consolidation.

Vince watched the tree line. His mind spun through patterns—ambush, intimidation, territory testing. But this wasn't war.

This was something older.

Predators knew when to lunge.

This one didn't.

It circled instead.

Restless hours dragged on. No new sounds. No clearer sign. Even the wind grew still.

Loris returned from his loop at the edge just before dawn, breath steaming, sweat freezing in his hair.

"Tracks again," he whispered. "Fresh. Same direction. Same… pacing."

"Pacing?" Maela asked, quiet.

Loris nodded. "Back and forth. Not random. Watching."

Vince didn't answer.

He looked at the sky—grey, dull, unmoving.

Then toward the trees.

Then at the fire.

Still breathing.

Still waiting.

And so was the thing beyond the trees.

It hadn't shown itself.

But it hadn't left either.

 


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