Chapter 23: Questions (not a chapter)
Well, first of all, I'm aware of a couple of things. For starters, I still need to fix some mistakes in the first few chapters. Time has been tight, but I'll get to it eventually—hahaha.
Second, I've just wrapped up the first arc, which was mostly about introducing the original characters and setting up how everything works with the TM, TR, and leveling system for the MC. Now, I'm starting a new arc that's completely different from the canon—after all, we're three years prior to it.
This next arc will be divided into two parts, like a big arc with two smaller subplots. It's pretty much planned out already, but I'm not here to spoil anything—it's just a heads-up.
This post is mainly to ask three things:
1. Your opinion on the direction of the book, particularly the plot. Are there things I might have overlooked or missed? Any feedback is welcome as long as it's respectful.
2. I've read some of your ideas about possible future arcs in the comments, and interestingly, some of them align with what I was already planning to include in the book, if you had another idea just share it.
3. Are you enjoying the book? How's the pacing? Is there anything I should improve? What do you think about the character progression and their interactions with others? And what are your thoughts on the original characters?
That's pretty much it. As I said before, I want this to be a good and enjoyable book.